Shouldn’t be you.

You are a killer

You denture my skin

You break my bones

You gash blood out of my body

My dignity means nothing to you

When I complain

You say don’t give me that tone of voice

The pain has become a routine

I cannot do anything because you feed me

There is no peace amidst this chaos

Shouldn’t be you,dad.

This goes to all the victims of family rape. It’s bad that people get raped and it’s worse when it is coming from a member of one’s family. Nothing last forever. The pain too. Oh! It’s fiction.


  1. ashok says:

    Yes, this is so very sad. But i don’t think it is only – About you feed me 😌 it is much more complex.
    Thank God it is fiction and a dream.. but still so very sad

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    1. oladewalaura says:

      Thank God it’s fiction. Thanks so much for your feedback.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. ashok says:

    Just saw your About page Laura. Beautiful. May God bless you. And that you keep inspiring people and sharing your love.
    Love and blessings 🤗

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    1. oladewalaura says:

      Thank you so much Ashok . This comment is much appreciated.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. ashok says:

        My pleasure Laura.

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  3. So powerful and filled with emotion. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Ohhh this is touching yet sad and true to believe. You write well.

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  5. Abdul-Quadri Ilesanmi says:

    Heyyy. The change of name is actually nice.

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